Monday 27 January 2014

struggle and success draft 2


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 it was a Monda I was going to school nervousl because i was the day which my Englis teache say tha he is goin the tel th SA2 English marks for everone so I was nervous.

             When I open my tes paper I got a heart atack because I got 19 out f 100, it was a U grad. then after school I went home with my my test paper. after my parents see my test paper the scolded me. from then onwards I decided to study hard but I did not know how to improve my English.

               the next morning I went to school, when I reach school the firs thing I did was to go to the staff where I can meet my English teacher.

               when I aproached another teacher to help me call my English teacher .the techer told me that my English teacher was ot in school so the end of th day I was going home without knowing how to improve my English.

                then whe I was on the way home I got an idea. the idea was abou goin to me tuitio teacher’s hous to ask for some tips on improving my english so as I thoug I approache my tuition eacher’s hous and knock the door an  call for my english teacher .then onl my tuition  teacher’s neighbo told me tha my teacher have gone out .

                 The next day I aproach my english teacher and as for some tips on improving on my english and he also gave me some tip. from that day onward I followe all the tip and i though all the tips which my English teacher gave was enough so I didn’t approac my tuiti teaer. And the nex tes my mar increas and fo PSLE [Primary School Leaving Examination] I scored a “c”.  

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